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I am not yet broken
I am young
A fresh virgin, learning under the sun
Wrapped in white
Smelling flowers in my dreams
My knees are shaking
I am afraid to open my eyes
Not yet knowing what awaits me

I have been broken
No longer a blinded youth
Been torn, bloodied, and pain
I have lain
I have touched
O Mother of mine
I have loved

I wear scarlet
I go barefoot
Smeared with the blood of a berry bush
I laugh as I am alone
voice echoing, not that senseless tone

I am one with you
colorless, faceless
Just with you, placed aside my maidenhood
Speechless and restless
I look
eye wide
I am open
Open eyes
I am not blind
You are faceless
But I see that face
Mine to touch, caress, bless

Grown
From white
to Scarlet
Now I am nothing
Grown
from Flawless
to broken
Now I am nothing
Grown
From maiden
to woman
Now I am nothing

Nothing but love
But passion
But burning fire
Nothing but everything I ever was  
:iconbeauty-in-ur-eyes:

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do whatever with it.
Kiss Kiss

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:iconlordlossxz:
wow.... ok, i think that is the best thing youve ever written. no joke. i love it. its amazing... so much symbolism
and passion
i love that you put soo much of yourself into this
including the paganism
the love
your beliefs
your feelings
its incrfedible...

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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?

Read my poems, please!
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:iconbeauty-in-ur-eyes:
u make me blush
Undress
Now
bare yourself
dreamless sleep
Because nothing is better than my reality


That just poped in my head

KISSES!!!!

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Merry Meet Merry Part Blessings to the gentle heart
:iconthe-f00l:
this is really good :)

i like the theme and the time sequences it makes one stop to think while reading it

wish i could here it performed

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"[I] stood up straight and looked the world squarely in the fields and hills. To add weight to [my] words [I] stuck the rabbit bone in [my] hair. [I] spread [my] arms out wide. `I will go mad!' [I] announced."
:iconlordlossxz:
wooot!!!

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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?

Read my poems, please!
[link]
:iconbeauty-in-ur-eyes:
it was intended as a performance piece,, but i guess it could one.. Thanks for by fav.

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Merry Meet Merry Part Blessings to the gentle heart
:iconthe-f00l:
no problem - thanks for posting

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"[I] stood up straight and looked the world squarely in the fields and hills. To add weight to [my] words [I] stuck the rabbit bone in [my] hair. [I] spread [my] arms out wide. `I will go mad!' [I] announced."

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